Song draft
So I was bored and I wrote a kinda song ( I turned it into a poem at the end)
This was one of the versions ( I kept editing it so there are so many different versions)
It’s about loving a fictional character
Pre-Chorus 1
Your story was written in the stars,
In a universe beyond my reach.
Every day I wish to see you beyond my dreams,
To feel your electric touch on my skin.
But then I realized
You were the perfection that would set this world ablaze
Chorus 1
Oooohhh…
Not every story has a happy ending.
In another life, you could be mine,
But reality traps me in its cage.
I wish I could rewrite our ending,
So that you could be mine.
I try to erase this mistake,
That trapped me in the wrong world.
I try to break these chains that stop me,
From diving into another world.
But the universe is against me,
And I hear you whisper:
"Some stories are meant to stay tragic."
This was a part of one of the first drafts
I changed this to a poem and it’s way longer I’ll share the actual final one later. I would love if you all could give me feedback on my writing
If you hate it please say that too I am always looking how to improve my writing.
Thanks
Book besties
Tell me if u want me to post more of the song or the final poem draft
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